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Point commission for ~xXIndigosplashXx
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Quicky before trip.
Hope you like it
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Character: ~xXIndigosplashXx ©
Artist: Me ©
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I will admit this is very good although there are some things you could have done better , for instance
The eyes should be up higher on the head otherwise it looks ... lets say little kidish , as if a little 4 year old would draw the eyes at.
The paw is getting better I will say and also the ears , But the fluff behind the ears and her back part is... needs to be a bit thicker and more fluffy. The shoulder also needs to be a bit broader and thicker.
I should also say.. the head of the cat should get a bit smaller and less dense , it looks to much of a box then a cats head.

Thats all <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Hope it helped

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