Embermask

This is a wonderful scenery and character appearance, but it could be better. I'll judge by each attribute this drawing has.

Wonderful on the background. The grass was put together well, and I've always loved the scenes where it's cloudy with a single strike of lightning. Though it may be a classic touch to the picture, the haziness of the picture could be adjusted so the people looking at this would have a better and clearer view.

The character is great. No one can miss those glowing eyes, but I've always thought you should make any one thing the main attraction. I saw a good picture before where the whole cat glowed with a little touch to the outline of the character. It would be perfect. However, I must say that the shading was pushed to the extent. I can barely tell where the light is coming from (of course the lightning). The shading could be better.

Otherwise, this drawing is viewed through the eye of the beholder, and for whatever reason you drew this up, you decided it was enough to give other people the same experience you had drawing it. I give this an average 4 out of 5, but I know, with a little more edited details, this picture could become even more fabulous.